
Birthright, by Willow Cross, was a book I chose due to lots of buzz on the paranormal Facebook groups I peruse. Plus, being a fan of the author's page, I found her to be a funny, honest person that interacts with her followers. Another plus!
The cover is lovely, I adore the blue eyes and the expression on the girl on the front. She's appears very young, but her eyes hold a hint of something more, both intense and open. I like it!
The first several chapters mastered the art of suspense. I kept clicking the pages, growing ever more curous as to why this young woman, Liz, was standing trial, and how the vampire Michael had broken laws in turning her.
In a series of flashbacks pulled from Liz's mind from the powerful vampire council, we start to understand. According the laws of this vampire world, a human must be bitten three time to turn, but Liz only received one bite.
She turned into a vampire alone, and I found her initial time, trying on her own to understand what had happened, both humorous and emotional. She consdered herself a monster, and had the presence of mind to understand she was not safe to be around family. Finally, her creator, Micahael, finds her and she begins a journey of self-discovery, becomes embroiled in ancient power-struggles and find out she has a place dead in the middle of it all.
The supporting characters were vibrant and unique. I enjoyed the Druid very much, especially his speach patterns, that reminded me of an old time cowboy, the kind that might be found panning for gold. But, as with others, he is far more than he apears. We are introduced to witches, as well. Minerva was a remarkable woman, and then there was a young human child, Jenna, raised by a human father, Dan, and a powerful vampire adoptive mother, Cass.
The dynamics between Cass and her husband proved immemsely rewarding, especialy after he was changed be necessity. No longer a normal husband and wife relationship, Cass was - and must be - in control of the man she loves. And Dan's new nature proves a danger to his own daughter, an intense scene that sent chills up my spine.
The Twists kept coming, too many to list, and most were a complete suprise! The writing and language choices were wonderful, giving the ancient vampires a sound all their own. Liz was kept as a young, secular girl, and I was impressed with the way young Jenna's dialogue was handled. Very hard to write for a child that age, and I wondered if the athor was a mother.
Now, I have to take off my fan-girl cap and slip on the (much much) smaller critique hat. There were several grammatical problems that I think would be caught easily on re-edit. Punctuation in dialogue was a continuous problem. For example: "I just wont let you have it." Michael said. The period before the quotation mars should be a comma. Good news, this is a very easy fix. These small things do not ruin a story for me, but it does 'pull me away' from the story flow when it happens too much.
Also, there were several long pages of monolougue, giving the reader what I call 'info dumps'. These stories were ineresting, but I felt breaking them up would have helped the story read a little smoother.
A few places felt rushed, In Chapter 8, there was a huge reveal, in regards to Liz's family, and I expected more. It fell a little flat for me, especially after the excellent chapers leding up.
In the end, I was torn beween 4 and 5 stars and wish I had the option for 4.5. I highly reccommend this book, and hope to pick up the sequel! Willow Cross has a fan for life with me! Thank you for taking me on such a fantastic, wonderful journey! brilliant work, four 1/2 stars! Highly Reccommened!